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Where Frozen Embers Still Burn

Keen cold so barbed it burns on touch in closet places where love gleaned; you walk across my fractured heart with stony steps pulsing obscene. Our memories, still fiery, glaze an ashen scar within my head, cremated love in shoddy urn holds dreams cruelly left for dead. Callous, as though we never were sure lovers--body, mind and soul-- you turned away, you had your day; hypocrisy demands high tolls. Now left shattered and abandoned, I shrink, huddled by icy fire; blue flames licking open lesions, seared white on brands of blank desire. Copyright, August 16, 2014 Faye Lanham Gibson

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Date: 8/29/2014 5:35:00 AM
Sad and heartfelt write, congrats on the win, Faye
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Date: 8/29/2014 3:45:00 AM
Showers of applause to your wonderful penning Faye! ^_^
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Date: 8/28/2014 8:26:00 PM
Hi Faye, such a powerful, moving, but so sad poem. The images were incredibe. Congratulations to you. Sandra
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Date: 8/28/2014 5:07:00 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/28/2014 4:35:00 PM
Hi Faye, This is a very powerful poem with solid images. Very strong. Very well done. Congratulations on the win. Take care. Earl
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Date: 8/28/2014 3:43:00 PM
Dear Faye, A very moving poem with many wonderful images. I especially liked the urn that held dreams left for dead. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/28/2014 9:14:00 AM
Very nice and well done.
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Date: 8/19/2014 11:01:00 PM
the angst fierce within the lines.. wow!
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Date: 8/17/2014 1:03:00 AM
This is a lovely sad write Faye ! Good luck in contest!
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Date: 8/16/2014 10:27:00 PM
Wow, Faye...this is so vivid and real...the words anguish born. Lovely write...Good luck in contest.
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Date: 8/16/2014 8:16:00 PM
incredible imagery very deep and dark - I love the line Keen cold so barbed it burns on touch - ouch! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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