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Where Frozen Embers Still Burn

Keen cold so barbed it burns on touch
in closet places where love gleaned;
you walk across my fractured heart
with stony steps pulsing obscene.
Our memories, still fiery, glaze
an ashen scar within my head,
cremated love in shoddy urn
holds dreams cruelly left for dead.
Callous, as though we never were
sure lovers--body, mind and soul--
you turned away, you had your day;
hypocrisy demands high tolls.
Now left shattered and abandoned,
I shrink, huddled by icy fire;
blue flames licking open lesions,
seared white on brands of blank desire.

Copyright, August 16, 2014
Faye Lanham Gibson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 5:35 AM
Sad and heartfelt write, congrats on the win, Faye
Kimathi Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 3:45 AM
Showers of applause to your wonderful penning Faye! ^_^
Haight Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 8:26 PM
Hi Faye, such a powerful, moving, but so sad poem. The images were incredibe. Congratulations to you. Sandra
Allison Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 5:07 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs Jan xx
Schumacker Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 4:35 PM
Hi Faye, This is a very powerful poem with solid images. Very strong. Very well done. Congratulations on the win. Take care. Earl
Devonshire Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 3:43 PM
Dear Faye, A very moving poem with many wonderful images. I especially liked the urn that held dreams left for dead. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 28, 2014 at 9:14 AM
Very nice and well done.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 11:01 PM
the angst fierce within the lines.. wow!
A. Sharma Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 1:03 AM
This is a lovely sad write Faye ! Good luck in contest!
Manassian Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 10:27 PM
Wow, Faye...this is so vivid and real...the words anguish born. Lovely write...Good luck in contest.
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 8:16 PM
incredible imagery very deep and dark - I love the line Keen cold so barbed it burns on touch - ouch! Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xxx
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