Where Does the Time Go

a faint star cluster
viewing ancient history
billions of years past

E=MC2 - Albert Einstein
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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A   Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 4:05 PM
tim, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 1:40 AM
Lovely write n win Tim.. big congrats!
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December 21, 2015 at 11:56 PM
tim, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
Guzzi Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 8:28 PM
which are the 2 joined lines- 2 lines must be gramatically as well as conceptually joined - your cut is unclear Cher - where's the season word? stay sensory [a moment frozen in time- a frame - the universe may be too big for a snap shot?] Light & Love
A. Sharma Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 4:20 AM
Wonderful haiku Tim! Congrats on ur win!
A   Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 12:53 AM
Tim, congratulations on your Traditional Haiku win. Love LINDA
Wigley Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 12:34 AM
A great Haiku, relatively speaking. Congrats, Tim. Regards, Viv
A  Avatar
July 1, 2015 at 12:08 AM
wonderful win Tim...SK
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June 30, 2015 at 7:55 PM
Great haiku, Tim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Roper Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 4:47 PM
Tim, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Callus Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 4:09 PM
Good question, Tim! Now, where has mine gone!!! Great haiku, and congratulations on your merited win. // paul
Ryerson Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 4:55 PM
The same place as MINE has gone I suppose Paul...Thanks for the encouraging comment my friend! - Tim
Richards Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 2:50 PM
Bravo Tim !!! Nice to be neighbors with such a great poet !! (at least on the placement list !! lol)
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 1:30 PM
big congrats again, my friend!
Hamilton Avatar
June 30, 2015 at 1:04 PM
great haiku Tim congrats on 3rd place hugs
Sietesantos Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Tim. I enjoyed reading this beautiful journey into time and space. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita
Kendrick Avatar
August 9, 2014 at 6:28 AM
Time speeds away or does it?..Way to go with this winning work..Sara
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August 8, 2014 at 10:07 PM
Brilliant poem, Tim! Thanks for your kind comments. Not feeling well, but got a lift today co-writing with Paul Callus. The Saints were playing tonight at the same time as the Tampa Bay Bucs, Jacksonville Jaguars and Miami Dolphins. Couldn't focus on the Saints, but I hope the won. The Jags beat the Bucs, but it was a good game. So glad football season has returned. I'm addicted. Surely your stunning haiku will be a winner in Regina's contest!
Devonshire Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 10:08 PM
Oops, I see it DID win. Congratulations, Tim!
Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 8:28 PM
HI, again, Tim, and Congrats on your win.
Onclaud Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 2:37 PM
tim, your light is on a speed.. huge congrats!.. huggs
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August 8, 2014 at 11:54 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
August 8, 2014 at 1:32 AM
Very brilliant write, Tim. congrats
Dietrich Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 3:19 PM
I like this one, Tim, I was going to do gravity for my Aha moment, using this guy's theory. I had read that he was imagining free falling and feeling weightless and that was his AHA moment for one of his many "theories." I don'T know where that one poem of yours is. I will search this page and if it's not there, you will have to let me know.
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August 8, 2014 at 10:12 PM
Yes, Einstein's theory is brilliant. I laugh each time someone says Sir Isaac Newton "discovered" gravity. I don't think it was hidden. LOL
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