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Where DOES The Time Go

a faint star cluster viewing ancient history billions of years past E=MC2 - Albert Einstein

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Date: 12/22/2015 4:05:00 PM
tim, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 1:40:00 AM
Lovely write n win Tim.. big congrats!
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Date: 12/21/2015 11:56:00 PM
tim, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2015 8:28:00 PM
which are the 2 joined lines- 2 lines must be gramatically as well as conceptually joined - your cut is unclear Cher - where's the season word? stay sensory [a moment frozen in time- a frame - the universe may be too big for a snap shot?] Light & Love
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Date: 7/1/2015 4:20:00 AM
Wonderful haiku Tim! Congrats on ur win!
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Date: 7/1/2015 12:53:00 AM
Tim, congratulations on your Traditional Haiku win. Love LINDA
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Date: 7/1/2015 12:34:00 AM
A great Haiku, relatively speaking. Congrats, Tim. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/1/2015 12:08:00 AM
wonderful win Tim...SK
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Date: 6/30/2015 7:55:00 PM
Great haiku, Tim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 6/30/2015 4:47:00 PM
Tim, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/30/2015 4:09:00 PM
Good question, Tim! Now, where has mine gone!!! Great haiku, and congratulations on your merited win. // paul
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Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/30/2015 4:55:00 PM
The same place as MINE has gone I suppose Paul...Thanks for the encouraging comment my friend! - Tim
Date: 6/30/2015 2:50:00 PM
Bravo Tim !!! Nice to be neighbors with such a great poet !! (at least on the placement list !! lol)
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Date: 6/30/2015 1:30:00 PM
big congrats again, my friend!
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Date: 6/30/2015 1:04:00 PM
great haiku Tim congrats on 3rd place hugs
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Date: 8/9/2014 10:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win, Tim. I enjoyed reading this beautiful journey into time and space. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita
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Date: 8/9/2014 6:28:00 AM
Time speeds away or does it?..Way to go with this winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/8/2014 10:07:00 PM
Brilliant poem, Tim! Thanks for your kind comments. Not feeling well, but got a lift today co-writing with Paul Callus. The Saints were playing tonight at the same time as the Tampa Bay Bucs, Jacksonville Jaguars and Miami Dolphins. Couldn't focus on the Saints, but I hope the won. The Jags beat the Bucs, but it was a good game. So glad football season has returned. I'm addicted. Surely your stunning haiku will be a winner in Regina's contest!
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/8/2014 10:08:00 PM
Oops, I see it DID win. Congratulations, Tim!
Date: 8/8/2014 8:28:00 PM
HI, again, Tim, and Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/8/2014 2:37:00 PM
tim, your light is on a speed.. huge congrats!.. huggs
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Date: 8/8/2014 11:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/8/2014 1:32:00 AM
Very brilliant write, Tim. congrats
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Date: 8/4/2014 3:19:00 PM
I like this one, Tim, I was going to do gravity for my Aha moment, using this guy's theory. I had read that he was imagining free falling and feeling weightless and that was his AHA moment for one of his many "theories." I don'T know where that one poem of yours is. I will search this page and if it's not there, you will have to let me know.
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/8/2014 10:12:00 PM
Yes, Einstein's theory is brilliant. I laugh each time someone says Sir Isaac Newton "discovered" gravity. I don't think it was hidden. LOL