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Where Does the Time Go

a faint star cluster
viewing ancient history
billions of years past

E=MC2 - Albert Einstein

spacehaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/22/2015 4:05:00 PM

tim, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 12/22/2015 1:40:00 AM

Lovely write n win Tim.. big congrats!

Skat A

Date: 12/21/2015 11:56:00 PM

tim, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/1/2015 8:28:00 PM

which are the 2 joined lines- 2 lines must be gramatically as well as conceptually joined - your cut is unclear Cher - where's the season word? stay sensory [a moment frozen in time- a frame - the universe may be too big for a snap shot?] Light & Love

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/1/2015 4:20:00 AM

Wonderful haiku Tim! Congrats on ur win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2015 12:53:00 AM

Tim, congratulations on your Traditional Haiku win. Love LINDA

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/1/2015 12:34:00 AM

A great Haiku, relatively speaking. Congrats, Tim. Regards, Viv

Skat A

Date: 7/1/2015 12:08:00 AM

wonderful win Tim...SK

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/30/2015 7:55:00 PM

Great haiku, Tim! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Eve Roper

Date: 6/30/2015 4:47:00 PM

Tim, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Paul Callus

Date: 6/30/2015 4:09:00 PM

Good question, Tim! Now, where has mine gone!!! Great haiku, and congratulations on your merited win. // paul

Tim Ryerson
Date: 6/30/2015 4:55:00 PM

The same place as MINE has gone I suppose Paul...Thanks for the encouraging comment my friend! - Tim

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/30/2015 2:50:00 PM

Bravo Tim !!! Nice to be neighbors with such a great poet !! (at least on the placement list !! lol)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/30/2015 1:30:00 PM

big congrats again, my friend!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/30/2015 1:04:00 PM

great haiku Tim congrats on 3rd place hugs

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/9/2014 10:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win, Tim. I enjoyed reading this beautiful journey into time and space. Excellent write with clever "AHA"! Pandita

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/9/2014 6:28:00 AM

Time speeds away or does it?..Way to go with this winning work..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/8/2014 10:07:00 PM

Brilliant poem, Tim! Thanks for your kind comments. Not feeling well, but got a lift today co-writing with Paul Callus. The Saints were playing tonight at the same time as the Tampa Bay Bucs, Jacksonville Jaguars and Miami Dolphins. Couldn't focus on the Saints, but I hope the won. The Jags beat the Bucs, but it was a good game. So glad football season has returned. I'm addicted. Surely your stunning haiku will be a winner in Regina's contest!

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/8/2014 10:08:00 PM

Oops, I see it DID win. Congratulations, Tim!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/8/2014 8:28:00 PM

HI, again, Tim, and Congrats on your win.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 2:37:00 PM

tim, your light is on a speed.. huge congrats!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/8/2014 11:54:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku "Aha" Moment - // Anne-Lise :)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/8/2014 1:32:00 AM

Very brilliant write, Tim. congrats

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2014 3:19:00 PM

I like this one, Tim, I was going to do gravity for my Aha moment, using this guy's theory. I had read that he was imagining free falling and feeling weightless and that was his AHA moment for one of his many "theories." I don'T know where that one poem of yours is. I will search this page and if it's not there, you will have to let me know.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 8/8/2014 10:12:00 PM

Yes, Einstein's theory is brilliant. I laugh each time someone says Sir Isaac Newton "discovered" gravity. I don't think it was hidden. LOL

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