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Did not our summer fly by fast? Eventually, we knew she'd go, Forgetting to remake her blooms; Green grasses dried to ashen glow. How happy was the month of May, Inviting hopes for summer fun. Just in a blink her days went by Kidnapped by June's much closer sun. Left to the magic of June's spell, More beautiful the season grew. No other time of year compares... Oasis of our year, so true. Pastels of flowers, velvet greens Quick to mature through July days; Refining fullness, but alas, Surrendering to August's phase. Then soon, her days too quickly flew Unveiling thoughts of autumn's glow Vowed to progress to winter's gray. Where did our short-lived summer go? Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: Alphabet Soup Sponsor: Kim Merryman Judged: 09/16/2016 Rules: 1 rhyming poem with a minimum of 16 lines and a max of 20 lines. Whatever letter that your first line starts with, the next line must start with the following letter of the alphabet, and continue in that pattern to the end of the poem.

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Date: 9/16/2016 2:38:00 PM
This poem is excellent Sandra! My favorite of the entries. Congratulations on your second placement with this amazing beauty! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/16/2016 12:04:00 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your 2nd place win in my alphabet soup contest! Beautiful imagery and a lyrical quality to your words stood out. Great work! Blessings!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/16/2016 1:33:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim, for the great contest, and for my wonderful placement. Looking forward to your next! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/10/2016 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful write Sandra...best wishes
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Date: 9/6/2016 3:41:00 AM
Perfectly written and great use of the months:)
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Date: 9/3/2016 3:17:00 AM
Well put. Reflect the passing summer nicely. Good luck in contest. All in good season. Peace, Love and Joy
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Date: 9/2/2016 5:52:00 PM
Splendid Mrs Sandra. Such a beautiful poem taking us through the months of summer. I love reading your poetry. It really inspires me to write!
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Date: 9/2/2016 4:41:00 PM
perfect end to summer Sandra:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/2/2016 3:35:00 PM
A fun read. Nice job!
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Date: 9/2/2016 2:27:00 PM
You make everything sound good, Sandra -- even the alphabet! :-)
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Date: 9/2/2016 1:39:00 PM
Well done for such a constrained form, an impressive write..good luck in the contest
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2016 2:19:00 PM
Thank you, Frederic, for your nice visit and uplifting comments! Sandra
Date: 9/2/2016 1:20:00 PM
Sandra, perfect for the contest, lovely poem for a lovely lady :)-luloo
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/2/2016 2:18:00 PM
Thank you, Laura, for your kind words of support! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

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