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Where Did It Go


Did not our summer fly by fast?
Eventually, we knew she'd go,
Forgetting to remake her blooms;
Green grasses dried to ashen glow.

How happy was the month of May,
Inviting hopes for summer fun.
Just in a blink her days went by
Kidnapped by June's much closer sun.

Left to the magic of June's spell,
More beautiful the season grew.
No other time of year compares...
Oasis of our year, so true.

Pastels of flowers, velvet greens
Quick to mature through July days;
Refining fullness, but alas,
Surrendering to August's phase.

Then soon, her days too quickly flew
Unveiling thoughts of autumn's glow
Vowed to progress to winter's gray.
Where did our short-lived summer go?


Sandra M. Haight

~2nd Place~
Contest: Alphabet Soup
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
Judged: 09/16/2016

Rules: 1 rhyming poem with a minimum of 16 lines and a max of 20 lines. Whatever letter that your first line starts with, the next line must start with the following letter of the alphabet, and continue in that pattern to the end of the poem.
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Marcum Wong Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 2:38 PM
This poem is excellent Sandra! My favorite of the entries. Congratulations on your second placement with this amazing beauty! 7 ; )
Merryman Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 12:04 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your 2nd place win in my alphabet soup contest! Beautiful imagery and a lyrical quality to your words stood out. Great work! Blessings!
Haight Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 1:33 PM
Thank you so much, Kim, for the great contest, and for my wonderful placement. Looking forward to your next! Hugs, Sandra
May Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 9:18 AM
Beautiful write Sandra...best wishes
Daniel Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 3:41 AM
Perfectly written and great use of the months:)
Hardison Avatar
September 3, 2016 at 3:17 AM
Well put. Reflect the passing summer nicely. Good luck in contest. All in good season. Peace, Love and Joy
Turner Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Splendid Mrs Sandra. Such a beautiful poem taking us through the months of summer. I love reading your poetry. It really inspires me to write!
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 4:41 PM
perfect end to summer Sandra:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Quigley Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 3:35 PM
A fun read. Nice job!
Arnone Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 2:27 PM
You make everything sound good, Sandra -- even the alphabet! :-)
Parker Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 1:39 PM
Well done for such a constrained form, an impressive write..good luck in the contest
Haight Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 2:19 PM
Thank you, Frederic, for your nice visit and uplifting comments! Sandra
Scars Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 1:20 PM
Sandra, perfect for the contest, lovely poem for a lovely lady :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 2:18 PM
Thank you, Laura, for your kind words of support! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
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