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Where Did I Go Wrong?

Where Did I Go Wrong? I was young, bright full of promise, full of light. High school passed in a blur, a victory too soon, too fast. They cheered, they clapped, Mom wept with pride, but I barely had time to feel it. Then the world changed. Tertiary welcomed me, but fate had other plans. A silent storm stole my path, cutting dreams before they could bloom. I searched, I fought, I worked, but each day felt the same. The hours passed, yet I remained stuck. Now, I drift through life, a ghost in my own skin. The child who once raced ahead, now stumbles through the past. And all I have are words not answers, not peace, just echoes of a question that whispers through the silence: Where did I go wrong?

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Date: 2/7/2025 1:30:00 PM
Excellent poem. We all start out well but not always end that way. The last line is poignant
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