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Where Courage Lives

Courageous are those in smallest rooms
Who stare at darkness and wildly plan
How a meal for six can be made tomorrow
From what might not nourish one slender man

Courageous are the women who lie so still
The very bones of their bodies ache
Rather than let their anxious men
Know that they too lie awake

Courageous are the men who work all day
To climb the walls, to make a gain
To keep them fed, against the rain
A brittle wind for counterpane

Yet praise their lives with some content
And fill with love what anguish spent





Submitted for Constance's mini contest...."Courage"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/31/2010 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, on your Honorable Mention in The Rambling Poet’s mini-contest, Courage Poetry contest with these creative words. Your creativity is outstanding. (Is this a sonnet, too?) Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/30/2010 7:49:00 AM
I aml very glad you wrote about this Carrie in your thoughtful way. It needs be said and felt and seen in this light always. beautiful. Thank you so much for all who live this reality and they are many. Into my favs. congratulations on a well deserved win.-Robert
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Date: 1/29/2010 6:40:00 PM
This is a great write, carrie. gosh, Constance in on a roll with these mini contests. Is this something typical here from time to time? Good luck with this very fine entry indeed. I too believe courage is something that every one of us can display in times such as these by just showing happiness in spite of our woes. That can be very difficult and I admire those that can do it well. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/29/2010 2:11:00 PM
well thought and well writen. John H Loving III
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:17:00 PM
Wow, the depth of the first two stanzas crushed my senryu. Excellent work Carrie and best of luck in the contest...Raul
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:17:00 PM
This poem describes courage and will so well Carrie,It speaks volumes, a good entrance indeed..Charma
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