Where Cheerful Robins Dance

Gleefully you and I smile from a scenic window on life
Enchanted by nightfall befriending quixotic autumn sky
Embossing crimson brushstrokes on vermilion arc
Akin to a painting in classical style of renaissance art
Parading in front of our eyes on a thrilling train ride,

When orange glow of sinking sunset playfully smiles back,

As we savor shrimp-creole with red wine in the dining car
And train-tracks beneath us rhythmically clickety-clack
Negotiating the panoramic curves befitting forested lands
Announcing the mighty reach of whistling train-horn,

When the half-moon above peeks through twinkling stars.

Balancing gingerly footsteps we jaunt back to our roomette 
Settling in on narrow bunk beds in a tiny modest space
Marveling the red, brown, golden foliage trickling outside
Falling on multi-color motif carpeting the misty grounds,

As engine screeches intermittently, braking, slowing down,
Screaming loud whistle-calls, approaching station stops.

We endeavor to sleep until dreams invoke beauteous dawn
Awakening to thick white clouds of dense morning fog
Slowly giving way to glorious sun-rays piercing the forest,

Where cheerful robins dance upon a long leafless branch
Welcoming marigold sunrise on the horizon’s blue path
As you and I reminisce in the whispering night of romance.

October 24, 2019
HM: Strand special by Brian Strand
From Atlanta to Washington DC on an overnight train
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Crabtree Avatar
November 12, 2020 at 7:50 PM
I rode a train a long time ago. It was interesting. Great poem, Vijay. I enjoyed it :)
Kiser Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 4:32 PM
Congratulations on this wonderful piece! You have me wanting shrimp creole now.
Chiri Avatar
December 11, 2019 at 3:54 AM
Congrats on your win!;)
Proxenos Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 1:06 PM
What an awesome train ride - filled with beautiful scenic sights as they rush past you, together with the rhythmic sound of the train wheels. Such a wonderful poem you penned Vijay - In South Africa we have our famous 'Blue Train' which travels from Johannesburg to Cape Town and takes a few days, along the ocean, through our forests, the Drakensberg mountains - a breathtaking trip. Thank-you for sharing such a beautiful poem, and a romantic overnight trip. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 7:55 AM
The blue train sounds like a charming trip...much appreciate your visit and comments, Jennifer--many thanks.
Delaney Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 7:30 PM
I love the title of this one and your journey is a delightful story. Hugs, SuZ
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Thank you SuZ.
Rose  Avatar
November 1, 2019 at 6:40 PM
Hi Vijay, just wanted to see if this goes through
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Pixie.
Lamoureux Avatar
October 30, 2019 at 9:09 AM
What a gorgeous piece. So much to luxuriate in.
Pandit Avatar
November 9, 2019 at 7:53 AM
Thank you Richard.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 9:06 PM
What a lovely picturesque journey Vijay. Thank you for taking us along with you. Gorgeous imagery in this joyful piece! : ) xxoo
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 6:00 AM
Much appreciate Connie..many thanks.
Aurora Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 5:25 PM
That is a picture that is well painted. What an incredible poetic journey.
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 6:00 AM
Much appreciate..thank you MA.
Warrior Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 12:21 PM
Beautifully executed Vijay...your quite the poet nowadays lol...I've got to up the ante lol...all the best my friend...^WW^ :o)
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:59 AM
Thank you WW.
Lindley Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 11:55 AM
You my friend have woven a majestic tapestry of vibrant colors, Nature's magnificent beauty and the sound of that train flying down the tracks.. A true gem-- and a very fine a fav too.
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:59 AM
So very kind of you, Robert! Much appreciate..many thanks..a special thank you for the FAVE.
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 11:08 AM
what a wonderfully descriptive write on a train ride!! Very romantic views you had!
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:58 AM
Many thanks Andrea.
May Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 10:58 AM
A tree with a scenic view..Well penned Vijay..
Pandit Avatar
October 28, 2019 at 5:58 AM
many thanks Joseph.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 3:56 AM
A wondrous voyage in the heart of beauty dearest, Vijay!
Pandit Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 8:58 AM
Much appreciate my friend--many thanks.
Riabi Dziri Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 2:00 AM
What a ride! Your ardent reader "gleefully smiles from a scenic window on life, too"! Charmed by an Autumn night view! adorning the eyes with colours of warm hues! nourishing soul and Self.. quenching the senses and carving the beauty and the feels into so amazing a poetry! I so much enjoyed your rendition of sweet moments in time, dear Vijay.. an other favourite gem worthy of rereads and appreciation.. Best regards and blessings.
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 9:02 AM
Yes--train rides are especially scenic this time of the year. Much appreciate the kind remarks, Besma..many thanks.
Anish Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 11:03 PM
I took a train ride to Vermont a few years ago. Something special about riding on a train as you show in this fine work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 9:00 AM
Vermont is so beautiful--especially this time of the year. Much appreciate, Matthew--many thanks.
Canerdy Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 6:29 PM
This beautiful, romantic poem makes me REALLY want to take a train trip! Janice
Pandit Avatar
October 26, 2019 at 8:59 AM
It's a lot of fun..much appreciate Janice--many thanks.
Devonshire Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 3:41 PM
Your poem has splendid description and brings back the old-time feel of the overnight train, Vijay. Arlo Guthrie calls trains America's "native sons." So glad I caught this one, my friend. Excellent! Hugs, Carolyn
Pandit Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 4:24 PM
Trains were glamorous then..I feel they still have the magic. Many thanks Carolyn..much appreciate your visit and comments.
There Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 2:42 PM
Absolutely lovely!! You really took us there and still left so much to the imagination...Loved this, Vijay ~ a fave.
Pandit Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 4:20 PM
Much appreciate HT--many thanks.
Callus Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 1:17 PM
Your beautiful poem is brimming with captivating imagery, Vijay. It would be a pleasure to borrow your palette, brushes and paints! ~ Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 4:19 PM
Happy to read your feedback Paul..much appreciate--many thanks.
Godwin Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 6:06 AM
I've been on those tracks from Florida to DC. Loved the imagery, this is a splendid poem beautifully unfolded by you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Pandit Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 11:21 AM
You know first hand this wonderful experience. Much appreciate your kind remarks CayCay..many thanks.
Nicole Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 9:19 PM
You always paint such vivid images with your words. Every moment comes to life. You truly are an Artist!! A Masterpiece you have created once more. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy
Pandit Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Enjoyed reading your comments, as always. Much appreciate Brandy..many thanks.
Ball Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 7:58 PM
Lovely Vijay. Very romantic. Beautiful imagery. God Bless, JB
Pandit Avatar
October 25, 2019 at 11:18 AM
Thank you Judy--much appreciate.
Andresen Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 1:26 PM
- Many beautiful pictures through your window, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pandit Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 5:20 PM
Yes indeed--beautiful scenery! Much appreciate Anne-Lise..many thanks.
Michael Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 10:50 AM
I would love to hear this read aloud by "YOU"...Lovely write...
Pandit Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 5:19 PM
I know what you mean..but I don't have those skills. Much appreciate Arturo..many thanks, my friend.
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