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Where Are You

Through the window of my heart I used to see Images of my friends, parents, you and me Some make make me laugh, others make me cry A mixture of bright days and dark skies Vivid memories of my little house Where I played as a kid without any grouse Youth and adulthood, loss and love Both caged birds and soaring doves I see my parents trying to make ends meet And how despite their efforts only misery did greet How in their eyes I saw both hope and despair My beautiful house in various states of disrepair Through the small door of my heart you entered My friend, My love, and you mentored Me in the nuances of life and ways right Seeing you used to be my day's best sight Then there were times when the sky was dark Actions unwarranted due to emotions stark Words exchanged that jeopardized our very relation That seemed to rock my little house's foundation But through every turmoil we stood strong Enduring every storm, sustained a relation long So through the window of my heart I still see you And I want you near me; Where are you?

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Date: 3/13/2017 12:04:00 PM
Such a moving poem this is .Awesome.Welcome to ps>>Charma : )
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Manoj Kumar
Date: 3/16/2017 2:14:00 AM
Thank you Charma
Date: 3/13/2017 3:37:00 AM
A really good poem, evokes various feelings. I hope you find your lost love Manoj
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Manoj Kumar
Date: 3/16/2017 2:14:00 AM
Thank You Maria
Date: 1/22/2017 7:52:00 AM
Hope you find the person you're looking for, Manoj:) memories well jotted down:)
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Manoj Kumar
Date: 1/23/2017 10:39:00 PM
Thanks Jo
Date: 1/20/2017 7:42:00 PM
This sounds like an old lover, someone very close to you. A longing poem, and I Hope you can find your way back to this special person.
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Manoj Kumar
Date: 1/23/2017 10:40:00 PM
Just my imagination Andrea :)... Thanks for taking time out to read
Date: 1/19/2017 5:48:00 AM
Dear Manoj, a lovely poem...there is wait, hope and memories of your life flowing through your words like a sequel making the reader get the glimpse of rising and falling events and emotions....i liked it ! a 7!//love, Anu:)
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Manoj Kumar
Date: 1/23/2017 10:40:00 PM
Thanks Anu
Date: 1/19/2017 12:52:00 AM
Simple longing can be quite profound, as in this poem. An evocative look back. Fine work. JH
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Manoj Kumar
Date: 1/19/2017 1:33:00 AM
Thanks for the kind words John

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