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Where Are You

All my poetries are gone.......and now I'm vacant like a desert Because you are not here. All my songs are gone...and now I'm soundless like a broken Piano Because you are not here. All my hopes are gone.. and now I'm a passenger of Coleridege's ancient mariner. Because you are not here. All my pleasures are gone.. and I'm a child who has a broken dollhouse Because you are not here. All my fingers are afraid.....and they are restless like the sway-hair of a absent minded virgin. Because you are not here.

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Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/4/2013 7:52:00 AM

Oh my goodness! This is absolutely stunning. You created a wealth of sadness and longing with your wonderful similes. Can't wait to read more of your work.

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 12/2/2013 10:42:00 AM

Excellent, have a nice (permanent) stay here in poetrysoup with such great poems and similes!

Skat A

Date: 11/19/2013 11:07:00 PM

Madhu, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/17/2013 1:09:00 PM

Madhu, sad and emotional... , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/17/2013 12:34:00 PM

- Welcome to P-Soup, Madhu ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)