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Where Are You

You flourished and blurred like a spark on wind Gracefully and quickly like a frightened hind in pursuit of light You harvested through bushy meadows taken by blight In struggle with plight had you lost your might And gave out although never you gave up. Where are you? For you must be still there. For I still can feel you somewhere in the air.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/1/2012 5:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Lisa's "One Silver Tear" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:21:00 PM
LUKASZ., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in LISA'S' contest..... always~ PD
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Date: 7/29/2012 10:51:00 AM
congrats!!! nice poem indeed!! Mary
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Date: 7/29/2012 9:16:00 AM
Congratulations Lukasz, on a wonderful write and 2nd place win. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Date: 7/29/2012 6:50:00 AM
congrats on a most wonderful write and win .. amazing lines for this theme luv..
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Date: 7/28/2012 10:47:00 PM
Lucasz, congrats on your win! A touching write... Love and Blessings
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Date: 7/28/2012 9:14:00 AM
Lukasz, congrats on your win! Well done. Love, Kim
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Date: 7/28/2012 4:14:00 AM
Lukasz, congrats on your win, excellent..David
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Date: 7/7/2012 11:11:00 PM
lw, congratulations in Brian Strand's 186th contest. Take care, it's been fun reading many winners tonight* PD
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Date: 7/4/2012 12:27:00 PM
Excellent imagery, couplet arrangement and rhyming! I like your style!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 7/3/2012 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "#186" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/1/2012 9:20:00 PM
Congratulations on a winning poem. Pure delight to read.
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Date: 6/29/2012 8:30:00 AM
the air you breath,HE just went into your lungs,great write Lukasz
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Date: 6/29/2012 7:46:00 AM
To me..He is always with us. Peace and blessings.
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