Where Are You

You flourished and blurred
like a spark on wind

Gracefully and quickly like a frightened hind
in pursuit of light

You harvested through bushy meadows
taken by blight

In struggle with plight
had you lost your might

And gave out
although never you gave up.

Where are you?
For you must be still there.

For I still can feel you
somewhere in the air.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Lisa's "One Silver Tear" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol
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July 29, 2012 at 10:21 PM
LUKASZ., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in LISA'S' contest..... always~ PD
Liwayway Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 10:51 AM
congrats!!! nice poem indeed!! Mary
Muzzey Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations Lukasz, on a wonderful write and 2nd place win. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
Sweetheart Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 6:50 AM
congrats on a most wonderful write and win .. amazing lines for this theme luv..
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July 28, 2012 at 10:47 PM
Lucasz, congrats on your win! A touching write... Love and Blessings
Merryman Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 9:14 AM
Lukasz, congrats on your win! Well done. Love, Kim
Williams Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 4:14 AM
Lukasz, congrats on your win, excellent..David
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July 7, 2012 at 11:11 PM
lw, congratulations in Brian Strand's 186th contest. Take care, it's been fun reading many winners tonight* PD
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July 4, 2012 at 12:27 PM
Excellent imagery, couplet arrangement and rhyming! I like your style!! Best wishes, Keith
Brown Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "#186" contest Lukasz. Love, Carol
Grisetti Avatar
July 1, 2012 at 9:20 PM
Congratulations on a winning poem. Pure delight to read.
Palmer Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 8:30 AM
the air you breath,HE just went into your lungs,great write Lukasz
Henderson Avatar
June 29, 2012 at 7:46 AM
To me..He is always with us. Peace and blessings.
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