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Hello there, oh glowing one Radiant in resplendent light We see you have travelled far In as of course vibrationally Nestled in a cocoon of bliss Speckled by the elixir divine Emitting soothing fragrance Wafting across the inky void Dwelling in a dome of delight Oh dear one, this joy exalted Aspirational as also laudable Is it as yet suffused with love Awakened from erst passivity Selflessly choosing self-exile Descending into gross realms Where demonic fears haunt Despondent souls in darkness For if not, dear heart, reflect We delight at your splendour Glimpsed by periscope vision Yet what avail transcendence Which yets nurtures the ego Transfixed in bliss thunderous That is held captive in a shell Shared not among all brethren Of what use are yogic powers If not energised by love divine Love within in our heart knows How compassion slowly grows 18-September-2021 Letter to your future self Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One

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Date: 10/17/2021 12:26:00 PM
This is an amazing poem for the contest... i can feel the positive and spiritual nature to it and finished perfectly with those last two lines.... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 10/17/2021 7:06:00 PM
Thank you, Silent One! Honoured :)
Date: 9/18/2021 12:52:00 AM
Loved the change of style. The last two lines are great.
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