Rama Balasubramanian Poet Monorhyme

Where Are We Headed

Puppet of sensations
Dancing to temptations
Cyclical rotation 
Without cessation
Since generations.
Same location!
Same destination!

Goal of creation
Our elation
From fixation
To floatation
Ending our duration
In this creation
Through activation
Of divine vibrations
And realization
Of salvation
Thus exhalation
Of our station
Thereby cessation
Of rotation.

12.04.2021
Written for where are we headed contest
Host - Unseeking Seeker
Premier contest winner- 10th place
Brian Strand contest - 1st position
Your best monorhyme William Kekaula - 1st Position

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Jeanne Mcgee August 23, 2021 at 11:21 AM What a cute monorhyme Rama. Congrats on your win.

Krish Radhakrishna August 20, 2021 at 11:16 PM congrats on your win. A nice presentation of punarapi jananam punarapi maranam. Well done!!

William Kelii Kekaula August 20, 2021 at 8:55 PM Like a Merry-Go-Round, goes up and down, all know that it starts and all know that it ends, but what comes next? Blessings, Rama, for sharing your profound talents, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman June 28, 2021 at 9:31 AM Delightfully creative monorhyumes Rama. They gently move your theme with a lyrical quality to its conclusion. Congratulations on both of your wins. Blessings my friend.

Unseeking Seeker April 23, 2021 at 9:14 PM Rama, thank you for sharing your inspirations and your placement. Look forward to your participation in the next contest ‘Our last thoughts’ Rama Balasubramanian April 24, 2021 at 11:20 AM Thanks for the wonderful prompt and my generous placement. Will surely participate in your next contest. I like the theme. Take care, God bless, Rama