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Where Are We Headed

Puppet of sensations Dancing to temptations Cyclical rotation Without cessation Since generations. Same location! Same destination! Goal of creation Our elation From fixation To floatation Ending our duration In this creation Through activation Of divine vibrations And realization Of salvation Thus exhalation Of our station Thereby cessation Of rotation. 12.04.2021 Written for where are we headed contest Host - Unseeking Seeker Premier contest winner- 10th place Brian Strand contest - 1st position Your best monorhyme William Kekaula - 1st Position

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 8/23/2021 11:21:00 AM

What a cute monorhyme Rama. Congrats on your win.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 8/20/2021 11:16:00 PM

congrats on your win. A nice presentation of punarapi jananam punarapi maranam. Well done!!

Hilo Poet

Date: 8/20/2021 8:55:00 PM

Like a Merry-Go-Round, goes up and down, all know that it starts and all know that it ends, but what comes next? Blessings, Rama, for sharing your profound talents, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/28/2021 9:31:00 AM

Delightfully creative monorhyumes Rama. They gently move your theme with a lyrical quality to its conclusion. Congratulations on both of your wins. Blessings my friend.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/23/2021 9:14:00 PM

Rama, thank you for sharing your inspirations and your placement. Look forward to your participation in the next contest ‘Our last thoughts’

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 4/24/2021 11:20:00 AM

Thanks for the wonderful prompt and my generous placement. Will surely participate in your next contest. I like the theme. Take care, God bless, Rama