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Death is like falling asleep and waking up in God's beautiful garden. ~anonymous I long for the quiet place toward which I go with simpleness of mind, and yearning in my heart to rest among the kind. I long for the quiet evening of life's last breath, to consider younger days and whether I chased dreams with bliss-filled wonder. I long for the quiet time of satisfaction, knowing I've met the goal of living in the world without losing my soul. I long for the quiet garden that waits beyond the boundary of life, to walk eternal paths, free from struggle and strife.

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Date: 7/8/2024 9:52:00 PM
Beautiful quote, Philosophic thoughts, Congratulations dear poet. Happy writing.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/9/2024 11:37:00 AM
Thank you.
Date: 7/8/2024 7:42:00 PM
Thank you for your awesome entry. Of all poems submitted this was closest to my heart and best reflects my own personal beliefs
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/8/2024 8:29:00 PM
Thank you. I am honored to have my poem in the top ten of your contest.
Date: 7/3/2024 2:14:00 PM
Heaven sounds wonderful. Still, I'd like a few dogs up there. I enjoyed the hopefulness of the poem.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/3/2024 3:34:00 PM
I love my dogs, too. Thank you for commenting. I appreciate it.
Date: 7/2/2024 6:53:00 AM
Not so simple Chetta..? I really appreciate this Write however, May you achieve such reward'
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Chetta Achara
Date: 7/3/2024 3:34:00 PM
Thank you.

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