Where Am I Going

Where am I going?


Where am I going? There is no sign.
There is nobody to make sunshine.
There is nobody that I can trust.
There is no proof that ever is just.
There is no desire; there is no game.
There is nobody but me to blame.
There is no death, and there is no grave.
There is no power to pray and save.
Where is this place that I am going?
Nothing seems real; there is no knowing.
There is no trace, and there is no clue.
They promised heaven without they knew. 
Within my mind, I am so lost.
The pain, I learned it, is my cost.
Haloo
10/2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/2/2018 1:18:00 PM
Hello Pashang Salehi, this is such a sad poem. Pain takes time to heal, I know because it took me time to heal. In time you will to. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/1/2016 1:29:00 PM
When we are ill and in pain..we ask will.iy end? Is there a heaven to follow where we are to.rest.I do believe there is a sky of heaven,and another heaven on earrh.Im praying for you after I read Danuel s blog few days ago..God bless
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/1/2016 8:08:00 PM
Thank you... you're so kind
Date: 2/10/2016 8:42:00 PM
The cure....wait for it.....little acts of kindness! Good poem! Pashang!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/11/2016 9:52:00 AM
We are all going to find out, sooner or later...Thanks James
Date: 10/28/2015 10:35:00 PM
Amazing work...just loved the poem.^^
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 10/28/2015 11:09:00 PM
Thank you Gautam. I read your unknown Angel. It is nice. It seems you're in love. Who ever she is, she is a tree and you're its shade, enjoy the harmony.
Date: 10/26/2015 5:24:00 PM
Pashang, good question. I believe in Heaven... I know what waits for me. Love this poem. SKAT
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Date: 10/26/2015 11:56:00 PM
Thanks SKAT Rumi said, I am drunk and you are mad who'll take us home and make us glad? Said a hundred times, if you had two or three cups less, won't be bad.
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