Whenever He Spoke

whenever he spoke 
she felt like she was on trial
for her existence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 14, 2011 at 3:44 PM
Looks like a good senryu. It's not easy writing a descriptive senryu due to its obvious limitations, but it appears you have turned the trick with this one.
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