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Whenever He Spoke

whenever he spoke she felt like she was on trial for her existence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/14/2011 3:44:00 PM
Looks like a good senryu. It's not easy writing a descriptive senryu due to its obvious limitations, but it appears you have turned the trick with this one.
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