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Whenever

Sitting at the café
Reminiscences
Stroll by
Revisit,
Afterward 
Abscond.

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Date: 11/29/2008 12:19:00 PM

So much packed into this concise poem. Nice use of alliteration. Enjoyed it! Karen

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 10/19/2008 5:15:00 PM

There are several cafes I had thought about revisiting. I know they would love to see me. However, I would have to slip away to get away so I could go home and get some rest. I like the imagery. Great job! ~Joseph

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/19/2008 6:29:00 AM

Ah, you leave so much to the imagination yet at the same time paint quite a picture in our mind's eye. It's also what's not said in this one that I love. The places our minds go. Well done. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 10/19/2008 3:09:00 AM

Hey I absconded a couple of times - just kidding - great poem that left me with a rather Nostalgic feeling - God Bless jamie

John Heck

Date: 10/18/2008 1:08:00 PM

Hey buddy, how are you? A simplistic poem yet, for some reason, it reminded me of one of my vacations to Paris...sitting at a cafe... eating an exquisite lunch and just breathing in the passerbys...loved the word abscond! Hope all is well. Peace always, John

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