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poem submitted to "Zoltar Speaks" poetry contest, Robert James Liguori, sponsor, June 6, 2026

WHEN ZOLTAR WAS MY NEIGHBOR

Zoltar moved in quietly,
carried up the stairs by no one
I remember seeing.

At night, his gears murmured
through the thin apartment wall~
a soft metallic prayer
to whatever listens in the dark.

Occasionally,  
I heard his cards shuffle themselves~ 
paper whispering secrets  
it should not know.  

Sometimes his lights flickered
under my doorframe,
as if he’s pacing,
as if he’s thinking.

One night, 
he slid a fortune under my door:  
The visitor arriving tomorrow  
died twelve years ago.  

Another one follows:  
Your shadow will leave you  
before the week ends.  

At dawn, the hallway smelt  
of burnt incense and cold metal.  
His lights flickered wildly,  
as if he’s arguing with something  
I cannot see.  

Then a final card appeared~  
edges singed, letters warped:  
Do not open the door  
when you hear your own voice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Gauthier Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 5:39 AM
eerie ~ a fun read
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