When You're Five

A distant dog competes with wailing winds, howling like a banshee in raging gusts. And a child cowers under the covers, hugging his teddy bear: a friend he trusts. The moon is sullied, smeared with charcoal greys, while lightning flashes light up his bedroom. And raindrops fall in tumultuous drops, as a cloudy, starless night, turns to gloom. His tears swell, as emotional dams burst; instantly flooding this little boy's face. And as thunderclaps explode in the night, his heart is beating at a rapid pace. The world is a scary place when you're five; filled with things that want to eat you alive.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gauthier Avatar
September 8, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
September 9, 2018 at 7:59 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Lawless Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 7:08 AM
...YOU HAD A TEDDY BEAR!!!!
Pinet Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:33 AM
Thanks John, didn't everyone...I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Cunningham Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 3:53 AM
Beautiful sonnet Emile, just back from Florida and the thunder storms certainly made my young grandsons' run for cover. Tom
Pinet Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:32 AM
Thanks Tom, yes storms can be very traumatic to the young, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Love the line "with his teddy bear, the one thing he trusts." Well done, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
September 2, 2018 at 8:29 AM
Thanks so much Line, as always I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Sergi Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 6:49 PM
Let me be (I hope) to congratulate you on a chilling poem in the eyes of small child that conjures up fear. Well done, Emile. My compliments!
Pinet Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 8:19 PM
Thanks Ralph, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Sergi Avatar
September 1, 2018 at 6:51 PM
Let me be the first (Ihope) to congratulate you on a chilling poem in the eyes of a small child that conjures up fear. My compliments!
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