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The bark of a stray dog joins wailing winds, howling like a banshee in between gusts. And a child cowers in a dark corner with his teddy bear, the one thing he trusts. The moon is sulking behind charcoal clouds as a muggy summer night turns to gloom. And the rain falls in tumultuous drops, as lightning flashes light up his bedroom. As the tears swell, emotional dams burst; instantly flooding this little boy's face. And when thunder claps explode in the night, his heartbeat jumps into a rapid pace. The world's a frightening place when you're five, filled with things that want to eat you alive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/8/2018 5:38:00 PM
Back with congrats on your win, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/9/2018 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/2/2018 7:08:00 AM
...YOU HAD A TEDDY BEAR!!!!
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Date: 9/2/2018 8:33:00 AM
Thanks John, didn't everyone...I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/2/2018 3:53:00 AM
Beautiful sonnet Emile, just back from Florida and the thunder storms certainly made my young grandsons' run for cover. Tom
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Date: 9/2/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Tom, yes storms can be very traumatic to the young, I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/1/2018 9:12:00 PM
Love the line "with his teddy bear, the one thing he trusts." Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/2/2018 8:29:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, as always I appreciate your comments and support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/1/2018 6:49:00 PM
Let me be (I hope) to congratulate you on a chilling poem in the eyes of small child that conjures up fear. Well done, Emile. My compliments!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/1/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thanks Ralph, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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Ralph Sergi
Date: 9/1/2018 6:51:00 PM
Let me be the first (Ihope) to congratulate you on a chilling poem in the eyes of a small child that conjures up fear. My compliments!

Book: Shattered Sighs