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When Your Ship Comes In

When you are hell-bent to fold your tents That's when your ship comes in heaven-sent They say things are darkest before the dawn breaks worse than rhyming cliches for goodness' sakes

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Date: 12/2/2022 12:24:00 PM
So many things come around and around and back, life is cyclical.
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Date: 12/2/2022 8:34:00 AM
Hmmm...I can certainly agree with this!
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Date: 12/2/2022 4:10:00 AM
Great one Gershon!! I just watched the sunrise to a beautiful beginning. Have a nice day :)
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Date: 12/1/2022 10:14:00 PM
With tents folded, start over another journey and the ship is ready. After a halt, we set out to new destinations ! Much suggested in few lines.... dear Gershon
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Date: 12/1/2022 9:17:00 PM
Sounds like game over, on to the next part of our journey. Tom
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Date: 12/1/2022 9:21:00 PM
Heh-heh. Think we oughta unfold those tents?! lol

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