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When Your Heart Was Mine

I wish I could go back in time to when your heart was once mine My dreams are shattered and my hope is gone I'm wishing you would come back home My happiness is laid to rest and I'm wishing you all the best The time we shared was once there but now it's gone I shall move on I look back at the past wishing it would of last The love we shared was once so rare has got me thinking life is unfair If I could I would turn back the hands of time when your heart was once mine.....

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Larry Berdoo

Date: 3/29/2014 5:41:00 PM

I sense growth on your part.

Waltraud I. Mack

Date: 11/22/2013 5:38:00 PM

Very eloquent thoughts reminiscing of what was once…

Funom Makama

Date: 11/22/2013 12:03:00 PM

very interesting. I enjoyed it.

Weston Gregory

Date: 11/19/2013 12:17:00 PM

like the sentiment...in line six is that a typo and should it be "wishing it would (have) last... nice write

Johnny Rhinem

Date: 11/10/2013 4:30:00 PM

† Ahhh, I Was Thinking Of This Very Same Wish Yet A Different Subject Earlier His Day Closer ˜ Tis Always Although That Pardoxic Truth Inside Knowing, All Is As It Should Truly Be ? Thinking If I Could Go Back Thirty-Five Years To When I Was Nineteen; Erasing A Life Filled With Regret As Sin...Going To Church, School, Working Loving, All At Every Turn ˜ But I Believe In Reasons And 'Mercy,' Which We Cannot Truly Grasp, Yet * Long Live Your Love ˜ Love John