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When Your Heart Was Mine

I wish I could go back in time to when your heart was once mine

My dreams are shattered and my hope is gone

I'm wishing you would come back home

My happiness is laid to rest and I'm wishing you all the best

The time we shared was once there but now it's gone I shall move on

I look back at the past wishing it would of last

The love we shared was once so rare has got me thinking life is unfair

If I could I would turn back the hands of time when your heart was once mine.....

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Larry Berdoo Date: 3/29/2014 5:41:00 PM I sense growth on your part. Login to Reply

Waltraud I. Mack Date: 11/22/2013 5:38:00 PM Very eloquent thoughts reminiscing of what was once… Login to Reply

Funom Makama Date: 11/22/2013 12:03:00 PM very interesting. I enjoyed it. Login to Reply

Weston Gregory Date: 11/19/2013 12:17:00 PM like the sentiment...in line six is that a typo and should it be "wishing it would (have) last... nice write Login to Reply

Johnny Rhinem Date: 11/10/2013 4:30:00 PM † Ahhh, I Was Thinking Of This Very Same Wish Yet A Different Subject Earlier His Day Closer ˜ Tis Always Although That Pardoxic Truth Inside Knowing, All Is As It Should Truly Be ? Thinking If I Could Go Back Thirty-Five Years To When I Was Nineteen; Erasing A Life Filled With Regret As Sin...Going To Church, School, Working Loving, All At Every Turn ˜ But I Believe In Reasons And 'Mercy,' Which We Cannot Truly Grasp, Yet * Long Live Your Love ˜ Love John Login to Reply