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When Your Heart Bleed Emotions

I get quieten.. When my soul fall into a moment of serenity.. I get still.. When a torifying light disrupts my dark eyes.. Then my heart plays a tone of melancholy.. My moment stops breathing.. When my words starts shivering.. When my words starts shivering.. My steps starts trembling.. I stop living.. When my wounded existence dwells me into a moment of downwardness.. Then my life croons a ballad of threnody..

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/21/2017 10:48:00 PM

awesome poem; very passionate -JT

El Sid
Date: 9/3/2017 11:42:00 AM

thanks

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/19/2017 12:35:00 PM

Such a nice written poem, I mainly like it for the feelings you ve described, how clear you was in describing them, that s what poetry is about, about being clear about your emotions and your feelings and you ve done a very nice job in this poem, well do me a favour, someday find time to read my poems as well

El Sid
Date: 9/10/2017 9:49:00 AM

sure

El Sid
Date: 9/3/2017 11:43:00 AM

thanks