When You Stopped Being You

WHEN YOU STOPPED BEING YOU 

When you stopped, 
being you 
My gentle world, 
fell through 

Lost on a sea, 
of my own making 
What you meant to me 

When you stopped, 
being you 
Day and night, 
meant nothing 
My plight 

Drifting, 
without a sail 
It cannot be, 
lost on a lonely sea 

When you stopped, 
being you 
My gentle world, 
fell through 

I looked for you today, 
you have gone 
Dying 
Lost 
You cannot stay 

When you stopped, 
being you 
My gentle world, 
lost too 

It is only me, 
alone 
Day and night 
On a desolate sea 

When you stopped, 
being you 
My gentle world, 
fell through 

Time cannot 
always heal 
the days you feel 
When you stopped, 
being you
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Cooke Avatar
August 4, 2011 at 12:42 PM
relationships so hard on the heart, a good poem and well written i like a lot
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