Violet Darling Poet Prose Poetry

When You Speak

when you speak..
          
          
such rousing vibrations   
pour from you           
          
Tendrils of sound       
meander from your mouth           
and settle around my neck           
          
They curl           
and thicken           
and tighten 
with delicious finger-like grip           
          
Soon, I mightn't be able           
to breathe       
  
I should beg you to stop 
But I adore that you're killing me

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Funom Makama June 6, 2012 at 5:35 AM This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work. Violet Darling June 6, 2012 at 7:49 AM Thank you for the lovely kind words. I look forward to reading from you!

Carol Sunshine Brown June 5, 2012 at 12:16 PM Violet a warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your lif . Love, Carol Violet Darling June 6, 2012 at 7:50 AM What a beautiful welcome. Thank you kindly :)