When You Shouldn'T Give In
the day after you feel like you can't go on
the day when everything went wrong
a day that just went on for too long
the night you couldn't see through the haze
the night in your head that just replays
a night where there was no end in the maze
a time when life has to begin
a time when you shouldn't give in
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