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When You Shouldn'T Give In

the day after you feel like you can't go on the day when everything went wrong a day that just went on for too long the night you couldn't see through the haze the night in your head that just replays a night where there was no end in the maze a time when life has to begin a time when you shouldn't give in

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Date: 2/17/2011 3:34:00 PM
Very nice poem...Jimmy
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Date: 2/16/2011 6:23:00 PM
Thoughful write, macy
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