When You Said It's Over

When you said it was over
I nearly crumbled to my feet
How could you look me in the eyes
When you said you would never leave?
I made a promise to God
That I would cherish you
That I'd treat you right
But how could I win this battle
When you left me without a fight?
I chased and chased
I cried rivers for you at night
But all you can do 
Is look for someone new
You ask:
Why?
Why don't you understand?
Why can't you get out my life?
Because your heart is always searching
When your home is right here...
With your wife
When you said it was over
I thought it was a lie before
But now I realize
I can't keep you trapped
If you already have one foot out the door
When you said it was over
I wanted to fix my flaws
Make it right...
But you can't trust an unsure heart
To come home to you at night
So now that it's over
Yes sometimes I still do wanna cry
But with a light-switch relationship
It sounds better to just say
Goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/15/2018 1:50:00 AM
He was unworthy of you anyway;-)
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Kapree Tripp
Date: 2/20/2018 2:37:00 PM
I was thinking the same! I really appreciate your comments: )
Date: 8/30/2017 12:10:00 PM
Very lovely just remember no matter what you your parents child, you maybe a sister, a girlfriend, a wife. But you first belong to Jesus Christ. Write ON!You are strong & encouraged Great write a favorite for me to save James :D
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Kapree Tripp
Date: 8/30/2017 12:45:00 PM
I sure do thank you so much for the support!
Date: 8/28/2017 2:38:00 PM
The soup family is a good place to cry when you feel no one listens to you , so sorry to hear your story Kapree, but you wrote it so well , God bless , it can only get better
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Kapree Tripp
Date: 8/28/2017 5:19:00 PM
Thank you so much! I really appreciate this comment
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