When You Loved Me

When you loved me
There I was sat down
Your gentle touch
And your soft voice
Of spoken utterances
Which serenades my heart
What a lovely moment

When you loved me
The darkness of the night
Could not overshadow 
The depths of hearts feelings
The brightness of the sun
Could not melt the sonority
Of the beats of the heart

When you loved me
Your electrifying presence
Was as spell binding
As a glowing nectar
Your presence I loved
Your absence I dreaded

When you loved me
Amongst those who longed
I knew I had a niche
Carved in your heart
The times we shared
Cannot be stolen
From memories vault

When you loved me
I brought out the smiles
Whose wonders are limitless
You opened my mind
To the world of possibilities
We pushed one another
With verve and beyond limit

Now I do not know
Whether you loved or hate me
Like a poisoned chalice
I have dreaded your absence

Seeking that smile 
Which I once had
On a golds platter
In search of that presence
That unlocked my inspiration
I am amiss what next
The powerful force
That arrests the heart
May not do justice 
To how I feel
Because I love you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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