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When You Kissed Her

did you taste me when you kissed her? I was there long before you, deeply imbedded in her love a tulip licking manic bug... but our time together has long past. We were a meteor shower a spring river lightning flash. Decades have past, i see your love for her is of the planet type, took a long time to spin into form but (doesn't burn as bright....as mine did). Has the density to absorb god, the death of passion and meteors- but it'll fade into nothingness, as all things do. Then in your broken hour chair of blue, you'll ask her next conquest did you taste me when you kissed her?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/1/2014 2:40:00 PM
Well done - perhaps she is/was a black hole bu t them I may be imposing my subjectivity. Nice feature!
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Date: 10/28/2014 6:56:00 PM
A poignant and authentic read. Love hurts sometimes...and then again it is the most beauteous thing in the world! Your poem is very moving!
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Date: 1/23/2012 11:49:00 AM
love sweet love - lovers come and go...!...?...! oxox hugs Anne-Lise
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