When You Hold Me

Bubbles
My tummy rumbles
When you hold me 

Tight 
I feel the strong grip
Don't let your hand slip
When you hold me

Flutter
My heart melts like butter
When you hold me

When you kiss me
When you hold me 
When you whisper to me

I get bubbles 
I get tight 
I get flutters 
When you hold me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Pettit Avatar
August 28, 2025 at 1:14 PM
Nice rhyming write that has aroused me.
Andresen Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 5:06 AM
- Beautiful poem Adrienne ! - Have a pleasant day - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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March 31, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Well done Adrienne. I enjoyed reading your poem... Verlena
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