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When You Go Deep Into a Wildland

When you walk deep into a wildland
Seeing butterflies dancing in flowers
It's chanting by flying you understand
Suchlike the angels touring in the clouds
You are romantic

While you saw a little newly born bird 
Chasing by a bulky starving grey mouse
Your empathy soar bitterly into absurd
And blame the predator for no occults
You are benignant

You are romantic and you are benignant
You will surely be blessed by the land

*Good luck for being positively romantic and having concentrated empathy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/10/2019 11:27:00 AM
Lovely poem. Nice imagery. Have a great day.
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 4/10/2019 6:34:00 PM
Cheers David! Have a nice day

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