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When You Give Up

When you give up Look up to the stars They will keep you company You may not see them every night But they will soon reunite And they will never abandon you whenever you see moonlight It may even give you something to draw or write To finish out the uncertain night Maybe to even help you dream, when your having sleepless fights With all that said despite You reached a bump in your story but don’t overwrite Look with your sight And remember you are not alone And you shine like a star And your strength remains ever so bright

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