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When You Get Old

When you are old not much seems new
But technology trolls and cars suck too
I like the old cars with frames solid heavy
Does good a heart with your foot on the levy 

New clothes aren’t new they’re copycats
Except the ripped new clothes not made to last
I miss the elegance that Hollywood once had
People barely dress now, wearing pajamas fad

When you are old more important things matter
But you notice these small things makes you sadder
If you speak your mind you’re a mad hatter
Still you love simple finds, the soft pitter patter

Of rain on windowpane, of footsteps of kids
They’ve broken the window playing like you did
You can find their laugh is like a mind kiss
Bringing back sweet memories of times like this

When you get old your asset is health
You may or may not have money left
But you know you can’t spend it dead
So money is funny you value time instead
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 2:02 AM
- So true, Karen : "When you are old more important things matter" - ("Body and mind don't always match when it comes to age") - hugs
Jones Avatar
January 24, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Agree with you Anne-Lise!
mysore Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 8:54 PM
so well written, so very true dear friend. kudos.
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 9:10 PM
Hugs much appreciated!
Crandall Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 12:34 PM
Wonderful! I can relate to just about all of this. I remember hitting a baseball through my neighbor's window, too.
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 12:47 PM
Really? Wow! Thanks for reading David!
Read Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 10:06 AM
I've reached that age Karen when health is the most important thing. xx
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 10:48 AM
Me too John! May your new year be blessed with health and happiness!
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 11:34 PM
That last part is so very very true
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:10 AM
Thanks for reading Andrea!
Wolf Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 9:00 PM
This is precious, Karen. I think you have really nailed the discovery that some call 'old age,' but positivists term, mindfulness, attention to the things that matter... FAVE-time for me. Thanks, Gershon
Jones Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 4:09 AM
Wow I’m honored you fav it Gershon! Thank you!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 10:42 AM
I enjoyed reading this wonderful write. Great last line. Health/time are the most important. Just ask any wealthy sick person. Have a blessed day...................
Jones Avatar
January 19, 2025 at 11:00 AM
I appreciate you reading Paula thanks! Have a blessed day as well!
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