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When You Feel That Zing

Love is a many splendored thing It's the meaning of life, it makes our hearts sing Without it we're lost As our ship gets tossed Till that person appears and you feel that zing © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/19/2015 2:10:00 AM

That zing! How we can relate! A fantastic piece in all respects. I must agree with Lyric Man down below, you surely master the Limerick, with ease, with simplicity, and truth!

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/19/2015 7:31:00 AM

I'm at a loss for words, dear Laura! You are too too kind to me, my sweet! Bunches of big tight squeezie hugs... xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/17/2015 1:12:00 PM

Yep... Then it's Zing... a ling... a ling! LOL... Dragon doesn't get it... But then... He's still young... Our little crazy thing...

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/17/2015 3:17:00 PM

Can't wait to sit in the mall an ogle all the young girlies in their shorter than short shorts! Whatta dirty old man, eh! LOL xxx

Anna Hopper

Date: 4/17/2015 9:38:00 AM

I may as we'll give up on writing limericks! You got this! Another 7

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/17/2015 10:59:00 AM

NO NO NO! Don't give up! Promise??? The limerick you wrote for me was excellent! You obviously understand the flow! Thanks again dear Anna! Huggsies, Jack xxx