When You Feel Life Is Crap, Has Too Many Hells

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Robert Lindley.


Sad tis it not, that this is a curse to me when I can not sleep
I wake to splash a bit of my ink and ponder on this my old age and life
watch the night crawl by and still my home castle safely keep
never forget the great blessing of having loving children, family and my beautiful wife.

When You Feel Life Is Crap, Has Too Many Hells

When you are walking through each day's hard travails
you feel life is crap, has far too many Hells,
try to see reality as that dark force,
that from insanity gives mind a divorce;
With such knowledge larger shield may be granted,
you may find life and love both are enchanted.

When your nights are long and needed sleep deprived
you find that as human, all life is contrived,
you beg for long sweet dreams to give your soul rest,
reality gives you yet another test;
To accept its darker and malignant deeds,
learn that everything dies and most of it bleeds.

When such pondering comes and your mind rebels
you feel life is crap, has far too many Hells,
know that you are not perfect and you know why
life is damn tough, everything that bleeds will die;
With that truth and its hard and deep final thought
you may find, life is a trap and you are caught.

When you are walking through each day's hard travails
you feel life is crap, has far too many Hells,
try to see reality as that dark force,
that from insanity gives mind a divorce;
With such knowledge, larger shield may be granted,
you may find life and love both are enchanted.

Robert J. Lindley, 2-17-2018

Syllables Per Line: 	
11 11 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 11 11 0 11 11 11 11 11 11
Total # Syllables: 264
Total # Words: 211

Personal Note- 
Could not sleep, decided to let my darkest pen ramble
admit my humanity and splash dark black ink to gamble;
Pen a few words to wile away these lonely after midnight hours,
defeat the invading evil flinging stones from fortified black towers.
This restless night the Raven shrieks out its deepest chilling calls,
in dark dreams, I stumble about in darkness, among fallen castle walls.
Poe echoes out his warnings to find the light and thus be aware
the Raven never rests, gives no quarter and simply does not care.
Raven does so much more than just send its terrifying calls
it lends darkness to invade and leave behind bloodied castle halls.
Scoff at this dire warning, and your sad soul risk it as blind
I wander through this realm, see monsters of every kind.
I am Poe, the greatest poet and horror master you will ever know
Ignore me and the Raven and I both, will put on an even scarier show.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/23/2018 5:58:00 PM
I stay up till 4:30 5:00 writing, as I hear others saying, To all their comments may I add, amen! bbn
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2018 12:00:00 PM
As can be seen, I have as of late written very dark and somber poems. This morn due to the influence of a very fine poet here, I have been inspired to start and finish to post an uplifting and very bright piece. One that has cheered this old and very tired poetic soul greatly AS HAS THESE VERY KIND AND GENEROUS COMMENTS POSTED BELOW...
Login to Reply
Date: 2/18/2018 8:12:00 AM
I love this one Robert! A definite fave! You express the underlying thoughts we get in the dark and alone. I'm still looking for my shied, maybe one day I will be granted one.
Login to Reply
Lindley Avatar
Robert Lindley
Date: 2/18/2018 11:56:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 2/18/2018 1:02:00 AM
'Learn that everything dies and most of it bleeds'. What an absolute belter of a line, Robert. A great piece, I think we can all relate to the rich pickings in it. Blessings, Viv
Login to Reply
Lindley Avatar
Robert Lindley
Date: 2/18/2018 11:56:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 2/17/2018 10:15:00 PM
At the expense of such great poetry, I do wish you sound sleep my friend. xomo
Login to Reply
Lindley Avatar
Robert Lindley
Date: 2/18/2018 11:55:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 2/17/2018 11:52:00 AM
This is really deep and dark, many suffer from insomnia.. I always think those who stay up at night could get up to so much mischief... I hope you can find peace and sleep my friend..
Login to Reply
Lindley Avatar
Robert Lindley
Date: 2/18/2018 11:55:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 2/17/2018 7:41:00 AM
Very eloquently done, Robert. May I suggest a melatonin supplement for a good night sleep. LOL
Login to Reply
Lindley Avatar
Robert Lindley
Date: 2/17/2018 11:44:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Date: 2/17/2018 5:46:00 AM
Oh Robert I can relate as I've struggled with sleep issues since my hubby had cancer surgery and often am up at silly hours writing. It's hard when your brain won't switch off and all sorts of things fill your mind:-( hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Lindley Avatar
Robert Lindley
Date: 2/17/2018 11:44:00 AM
Thank you my friend.
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter