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When You Come Closer

When you come closer Smell of amaranth Love brimming the froth Over your nude beach Unfading goddess All cells tremble Protoplasms Love sags dribbles Winter essence Seeds purple Swim in glue Molecules Touch Silk **** Kiss When you come closer: Diminished Hexaverse Copyright© Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty 11/20/2014

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Date: 11/20/2014 11:20:00 AM
Love the imagery...romantic and seductive. Well done! // paul #7
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/20/2014 11:23:00 AM
Thank you Paul for this splendid comment. Love. RAJAT
Date: 11/20/2014 8:40:00 AM
Excellent diminished hexaverse my dear friend Rajat! Well done in meter. Enjoyed my visit! A 7 for me! Best to you! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D.
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/20/2014 8:56:00 AM
Love D..HUGS! ...RAJAT

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