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When You Catch Cold

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Sickness can turn your house into a personal jail When friends come to visit you use anything as a veil The moments you lose track of the day and time If you need medicine you would spend every dime To pass the time you watch old episodes on Netflix Eating soup for dinner and inhaling vapors of vicks It feels like a vacation you weren't meant to enjoy Your phone, tablet or book becomes your new toy Every task that you had planned never gets done Your skin tone begins to change from having no sun If you're married your mate becomes your waiter Every sentence is "Honey can you do me a favor" When you're sick it actually gives you time to unload But this is your life in a nutshell when you catch a cold

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Date: 7/10/2025 4:13:00 AM
This is absolutely a cold in a nutshell. I think everyone should be able to relate to this. I enjoyed the end rhymes - suitable and fun. Great poem.
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Keyonda Aldana
Date: 7/10/2025 11:27:00 AM
Thank you... Seriously... Colds are that bad lol
Date: 7/7/2025 4:58:00 PM
Great work! No one likes to be sick! Crawl into a ball and sleep it away, if possible. Feel better!
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Keyonda Aldana
Date: 7/7/2025 11:30:00 PM
Lol... Exactly..I hear ya
Date: 7/6/2025 3:10:00 AM
Aren't colds, allergies, flu, COVID just horrible. Thanks for sharing this one with us but not the cold. Sara K
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Keyonda Aldana
Date: 7/6/2025 9:16:00 PM
Lol....Yes they are
Date: 7/6/2025 12:33:00 AM
Keyonda, Swell story in Vicks. Never gets old. -Richard
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Keyonda Aldana
Date: 7/6/2025 9:16:00 PM
ROFL...Right?!

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