When You Catch Cold

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Sickness can turn your house into a personal jail
When friends come to visit you use anything as a veil
The moments you lose track of the day and time
If you need medicine you would spend every dime
To pass the time you watch old episodes on Netflix
Eating soup for dinner and inhaling vapors of vicks
It feels like a vacation you weren't meant to enjoy
Your phone, tablet or book becomes your new toy
Every task that you had planned never gets done
Your skin tone begins to change from having no sun
If you're married your mate becomes your waiter
Every sentence is "Honey can you do me a favor"
When you're sick it actually gives you time to unload
But this is your life in a nutshell when you catch a cold

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 7/10/2025 4:13:00 AM
This is absolutely a cold in a nutshell. I think everyone should be able to relate to this. I enjoyed the end rhymes - suitable and fun. Great poem.
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Keyonda Aldana
Date: 7/10/2025 11:27:00 AM
Thank you... Seriously... Colds are that bad lol
Date: 7/7/2025 4:58:00 PM
Great work! No one likes to be sick! Crawl into a ball and sleep it away, if possible. Feel better!
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Keyonda Aldana
Date: 7/7/2025 11:30:00 PM
Lol... Exactly..I hear ya
Date: 7/6/2025 3:10:00 AM
Aren't colds, allergies, flu, COVID just horrible. Thanks for sharing this one with us but not the cold. Sara K
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Keyonda Aldana
Date: 7/6/2025 9:16:00 PM
Lol....Yes they are
Date: 7/6/2025 12:33:00 AM
Keyonda, Swell story in Vicks. Never gets old. -Richard
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Keyonda Aldana
Date: 7/6/2025 9:16:00 PM
ROFL...Right?!
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