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When You Are Older

When you are young
You hold your tongue
But when you are older
The world is a bit colder
You break that wishbone
In hopes you’ll never be alone
This place is scary
But the burdens we carry
Won’t hold us back
If someone is there to keep us on track.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2011 2:51:00 AM
Very nice piece, great job.
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Date: 2/20/2011 6:47:00 PM
Nice wording and rhyming in this presentation. What you have stated here is largely true.
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