When You Are Gone

The garden then will seem unkempt 
 birdsong silent, too 
 all the flowers in their beds 
will strain for sight of you

When you are gone the clocks will tick
and time will pass- its true
  this  once, glad heart frozen with grief
  will choose monotony

Slow motion grey -life steal away
the dawn has failed the dream

And nothing now will ever be
 what it was meant to seem

Suzanne Delaney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Oyewole Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 8:29 PM
I enjoyed reading this heartfelt poem of yours. Well done!
Collins Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 9:33 AM
Dearest SuZ- Hold on. love, Kathy
Sirak Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 7:41 AM
A strong sense of the anticipation of grief. It is coming and you can't get out of the way.
Mehta Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 12:19 AM
Very appealing and touching thoughts, Suz
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November 30, 2013 at 1:04 PM
- Touching and beautiful words Suz! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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