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When You Are Free

When you are Free Do you know yourself Can you see inside the painted walls Quick constructed plasterboards The disguises you find In a puppetry of events Later on When you are being Without thought And it will be in that easy company When an unshackled second Slips through you With margarita salt Your laughter will sound like yours And catching you ginning Find you then looking in; into yourself This heart that I have seen Did you know back then With all the slight of hand How you ever evaded the question in your eyes What manner of you was so despised When it accepted this bouquet of lies Handed to you with all its petty flowery Did you know yourself then Do you know yourself now Now that the fettered yoke has been lifted Now that the twinkle of yourself Has surpassed You forget yourself And in lilac ribbons of maidens vestal Presumed more than the innocence You where You knew yourself then In that calligraphy of wine and sangria Unguarded When you wrapped the fullness of your rapture And twirled on daisy heads Old time clocks blown by the breath Of your freedom Will I know you then Will I have the courage Should I then embrace this wild dominion

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/31/2009 7:51:00 AM
this is beautiful,many emotions wrapped together,hope this wild dominion gets your message so you can embrace her and get to know her--love poem--i love it--charma
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Date: 5/30/2009 1:40:00 PM
Dear Colin: So very sweetly, and lovingly written this is! Quite beautiful. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm so very glad that you liked it! Love, Janice Herzog xoxo
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Date: 5/28/2009 6:46:00 AM
And in lilac ribbons of maidens vestal ...In that calligraphy of wine and sangria Unguarded ... exquisite and speechlessly done!
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Date: 5/27/2009 8:13:00 AM
WHEN YOU WRAPPED THE FULLNESS OF YOUR RAPTURE AMAZING CHOINCE OF WORDS I LOVE YOUR WORK REGAREDLESS BUT THIS IS SUPERB
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Date: 5/27/2009 5:58:00 AM
Yikes. Consistently mind blowing, awesome poetry. Each write a separate journey, yet leading to the same goal, I do believe. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/26/2009 5:43:00 PM
In that calligraphy of wine and sangria Unguarded....awesome line..great writing...
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