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when you can learn a lesson when you can get a new perspective when you can work through the pain and discover all that remains when you can take a big step when you have a little help when you don't have a plan but it works out in the end when you can look inside when you can chuck the pride when your heart can accept tears no longer wept

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Date: 2/17/2010 11:03:00 AM
you can do whatever you wish "when you" put your all in it......:JP]
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Date: 2/17/2010 9:58:00 AM
I like the humility
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:55:00 AM
Inspiring but still so powerful. keep up the good work J B. --R. Emerald
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Date: 2/17/2010 8:54:00 AM
Very thought provoking writing today J B. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol
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