Jo Bien Poet Classicism

When You

when you can learn a lesson
when you can get a new perspective
when you can work through the pain
and discover all that remains

when you can take a big step
when you have a little help
when you don't have a plan
but it works out in the end

when you can look inside
when you can chuck the pride
when your heart can accept
tears no longer wept

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Jared Pickett February 17, 2010 at 11:03 AM you can do whatever you wish "when you" put your all in it......:JP]

Susan Palli February 17, 2010 at 9:58 AM I like the humility

Ryan Emerald February 17, 2010 at 8:55 AM Inspiring but still so powerful. keep up the good work J B. --R. Emerald

Carol Sunshine Brown February 17, 2010 at 8:54 AM Very thought provoking writing today J B. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Love, Carol