When Would You Change

When would you change?
Change for better,
And stop saying after.
It will not make better,
Your life is in bitter.
Your father is at the farm toil and moil,
Working so hard to break the soil.
Every job you dodge away,
Everything you term it as a play.
When would he enjoy overtime?
All your life is playing game.
Nothing will make you cope,
All you life is hope.
You are insatiable, 
Without any responsible.
All the good things you like,
But life is full of fake.
Living in allusion,
Without any mission.
When would you change?
Change for better, 
And stop saying after. 
It will not make better, 
You life is in bitter.
You never read letter,
Hope you shatter, 
Peace you scatter,
Depend on your brother. 
Blaming your mother,
For not giving you money,
To make the journey.
When would you change?
Change for better,
And stop saying after.
It will not make better,
Your life is in bitter.
You have to start now,
Never let your parent down.
Time is gone,
What have you done?
What have you get?
But only regret.
By P.Bah
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 15, 2016 at 6:41 PM
well done. LINDA
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March 14, 2016 at 12:26 PM
thank you
A  Avatar
November 30, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Bah, Enjoyed reading.... LUV **SKAT**
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January 8, 2016 at 6:39 AM
thank you
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October 16, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Thanks for your comment i appreciate it.
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March 14, 2016 at 12:26 PM
thank you
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October 9, 2015 at 3:10 PM
i like your poem. nice for everyone who still clings to the past ways
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