When Words Won'T Do

I am tormented by all the splendor 
The rocks, the trees
Their green, sometimes colored leaves
I am beset with finding the words
to communicate my thoughts,
To lavish onto the world
How it makes me feel
Words... I don't know the words
They couldn't properly describe
     The views from a mountain top
As the clouds swirl by
A hickory crested ridge
Smothered by a summers breeze
Alight with sunshine
     The sensation of riding whitewater
Through an ancient gorge, older than the 
very mountains 
Of the river spilling onto you
As you tame it's wildest waves
     The sound of two strings
Coming into tune, then strummed
By someone who has taken the time 
To learn the theory
Of every pluck, of every fret
     The soft, cool touch of lips
The first time you kiss
The person your heart beats for
And will beat for until it can no more
     Words will never fully express
So I will not try, too hard
Instead, I will experience things
So I can say I did
And I can say I lived

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 10/23/2017 11:33:00 AM
Now this is a brilliant free verse write, people need to read you.. You are talented.. I do like reflective writes and write about life... some people simply live to die... WE must live to be alive..
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Justin Clason
Date: 10/23/2017 1:07:00 PM
Thank you, that means a lot. I’m still trying to learn, as I just discovered poetry.
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