When Words Begin

Sometimes when I approach the pen
              I wonder what will come and then
My heart begins to re-engage 
                 And words begin to fill the page
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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 12:38 PM
Mike, your metaphor weaves a magical truth, added with a well-placed rhythmic tempo. My compliments for your righteous placement my friend, Aloha!
Gentile Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Thank you very much William !!
Hankins Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 10:08 AM
Mike, I think we have all experienced this. I loved the simplicity of your poem, and I am so happy it rose to this level in my contest. Congratulations!
Gentile Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 6:54 AM
Thank you so much Milton, I really enjoyed your contest!!
Ashley Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 9:48 AM
Dear Mike, you capture the moment of soulful inspiration so beautifully. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gentile Avatar
August 15, 2021 at 6:53 AM
Susan, that is so kind of you, Thank you !!!
Wolf Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Sometimes when I approach the pen, it leaks,... And what comes out -- My two readers both freak. ~ Grateful for them both! lol. Good one, Mike
Gentile Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 3:56 AM
I'm with you GW!! Happy Wednesday!!
Pandit Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 2:44 PM
It's the gift of poetry, Mike. Well said.
Gentile Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 3:57 PM
Thanks Vijay!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 1:38 PM
I like it and I know what you mean.
Gentile Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 3:57 PM
Thanks so much Richard!
Cunningham Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 1:29 PM
Once you get that pen in your hand its a cue to your muse to start delivering. Tom
Gentile Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 3:58 PM
So true Tom, thanks!
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 12:18 PM
Hello Mike Gentile when we reach for a pen and put it to paper, we never know what words will appear on the page. Happy Monday.Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 4:21 PM
Hello Mike Gentile, you are very welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend. xx-oo.
Gentile Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 12:31 PM
So true Darlene, thanks xxoo
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 10:56 AM
- Lovely written, Mike :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
August 9, 2021 at 10:59 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise xxoo
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