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When Words Begin

Sometimes when I approach the pen I wonder what will come and then My heart begins to re-engage And words begin to fill the page

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Hilo Poet

Date: 8/14/2021 12:38:00 PM

Mike, your metaphor weaves a magical truth, added with a well-placed rhythmic tempo. My compliments for your righteous placement my friend, Aloha!

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/15/2021 6:54:00 AM

Thank you very much William !!

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/14/2021 10:08:00 AM

Mike, I think we have all experienced this. I loved the simplicity of your poem, and I am so happy it rose to this level in my contest. Congratulations!

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/15/2021 6:54:00 AM

Thank you so much Milton, I really enjoyed your contest!!

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/14/2021 9:48:00 AM

Dear Mike, you capture the moment of soulful inspiration so beautifully. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Mike Gentile
Date: 8/15/2021 6:53:00 AM

Susan, that is so kind of you, Thank you !!!