When Weather Whispers Wedding

April
awesome arrival
await always avidly
as augurs amour

 
Betrothed
besotted belle beau
both blossom beautifully
beget baby boy

 
Cherish
crickets chirp constant
cockerel clarion call
can calm crying child

Written 27/07/2020
2nd placement
Let the pens flow -Alliteration poetry contest
Sponsor Jenish Somadas
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Dietrich Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Such precious thoughts! Congrats in this contest, Krish.
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Thanks Andrea! Delighted with your wonderful words of praise! My regards Krish
Mishra Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 5:14 AM
'augurs amour', 'besotted belle beau', cockerel clarion'...such vibrant pictures Krish. Congratulations on your win! :) This is beautiful!
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 8, 2020 at 5:20 AM
Thanks Aditi! Appreciate your lovely words of appreciation! Keep writing your wonderful poems! Best to you!
Wolf Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 11:32 AM
Some memorable lines here, Krish: 'cockerel clarion call' soothes my inner 'crying child.' Congrats on your win in the contest! Cheers, Gershon
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 12:18 PM
Thanks Gershon! An interesting contest and pleased to be placed!
Watt Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Great alliteration and wonderful themes, Krish. Congratulations, my friend ~ John
Radhakrishna Avatar
August 7, 2020 at 12:17 PM
Thanks John! Always a pleasure to hear from you! My warm wishes!!
Roper Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 8:39 PM
Perfect alteration, Krish, good luck in the contest.
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 9:09 PM
Thanks Eve! Much appreciated! Kind regards.:)
Michael Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Nice imagery here...
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 2:13 PM
Thanks Arturo. Grammar rules are often stretched in alliteration contest. Glad you like!
Cunningham Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 1:28 PM
Well written alliteration Krish, I wonder if anyone will be brave enough to go for xyz lol. Good luck in the contest Tom
Radhakrishna Avatar
July 27, 2020 at 1:35 PM
Thanks Tom! Not many words that start with those letters. Thought briefly about it. RST PQR are very popular!
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