When We Met

~When We Met.~
Battling everyday is so hard to maintain a healthy 
brain to keep up with our everyday work our 
thoughtful speculations of wanting the impossible 
to take place,has to change,by gaining self confidence
and become independent.

When we just met at the hotel lobby for recollection 
of work,accompanying us the sounds of 4 of July in LA. 
Our ceaseless conversations felt flawless immediately.
A faultless intimate sharing took over a mixture of
work and pleasure.

When we just met,our loving nature coincided with
authentic sounds of fireworks plus its music filling 
the sky with a huge combination of the most
beautiful Technicolor's of fireworks.

The sounds with musical lights combined together
allowed our eyes to sparkle more than ever,both 
of us became in a pensive dreamy mood for a rightful 
discussion about how love can start by romancing,
to evolve later into a durable long lived relationship.
He was so much my type of a man,an artist in his work,
very authentic,fancy,& has an unforgettable 
sense of humor.

Smiling drinking and eating with our discussing, 
constantly allowed us to remain in high spirits, 
behind us the sky illuminated our joy of being 
together,that delightful lasting closeness felt 
like a challenge awaiting for the unpredictable 
to happen,the tremendous sounds of fireworks 
accompanied with a charming tempo ringing
in out thoughts.

Instantly our touching hands felt permissive,
stimulative,devoted,his voice transformed into 
an echo inviting me to later go up into his room 
to heat up the bed and enjoy cooling off our desires.
Having asked me before about what color of roses I love,
Yellow.

Later on hand by hand once inside the room it was filled 
with yellow roses everywhere,and layered on the 
beautiful bed.
Suddenly, he threw my hand bag and held me so tight 
to waltz to the sounds of music,a telepathy between us 
and the sounds rang in our ears as a sweet mixture of music.
Immediately took my hand kissed it with his warmest lips 
begging to love me tonight,what a gentleman our body 
connection was authentic,flirting as a start was conceived 
in an artistic way,kissing wise and making love was 
memorable, slowly the sounds ended while gradually 
our naked bodies parted in the morning when our 
routine for work had to take place. 

We parted with a long sexual kiss,emancipating
another brutal night with a candle light.


Therese Bacha
1/7/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Rodgers Avatar
December 7, 2014 at 7:40 PM
A lovely evocation of a magical meeting. Keep the candles burning - on both ends if need be.
Carrillo Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:07 AM
Terry; This is deep with much sincere feelings. You know - the way that we meet that one special person, we will never forget. Let the candle always glow. Have a great day......Lucilla
Bacha Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:28 AM
Hi Lucy, so so nice of you love your comments. So happy you enjoyed reading it. Love Terry xoxoxoxo
Goff Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:29 AM
Wow...very cool, authentic emotion in this honest beauty, Therese! Thanks for stopping by...jimbo
Bacha Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 7:33 AM
Thanks James, your comments encourage me more to write. Have a nice day. Terry xoxo
Horsman Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 2:06 AM
awesome story, just like the candle light warm sincere and heartfelt...
Bacha Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 4:47 AM
Thank you Harry so much, have a nice day
Jones Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 10:00 PM
What a beautiful story of a lovely romance....
Bacha Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 10:12 PM
Hi Donna, its always so nice of you to come by, i am happy you liked it. Thank you. Love Terry xoxo
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April 13, 2013 at 9:17 PM
This is beautiful Terry, and very sad. I like the trace of light that was left behind in your heart.... Enjoyed, your poem :-) Always & Forever! GOODNIGHT xox~LINDA""
Bacha Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 10:14 PM
Hello our poet PD, thank for your good night wish, and passing by, and enjoying my poem. Love Terry xoxo
Nair Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Hi Terry, It's beautifully done and i did enjoy it thoroughly, thnx for your visit :) Jag
Bacha Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 10:16 PM
Hi Jag, thank you for reading my poem, have a nice evening. Terry xo
Sivey Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 4:07 PM
This has to be your best poem by far that you have shared with us here on the Soup! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this evening! You have created a wondrous piece here my friend! Thanks for stopping by my poetry! What a delightful poem, Great Work!!
Bacha Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 4:11 PM
So sorry Russell, i send Gail comments to you by mistake. Hi Russell, thank you for reading my poem, its always so comforting to read your sincere comments. Love Terry xoxo
Bacha Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 4:07 PM
Gail, so nice of you to pass again, i do appreciate that a lot. Glad you liked my poem. Have a wonderful happy weekend. Love Terry xoxo
Richards Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 2:45 PM
Such a treasure of the heart, yellow roses would forever be! Lovely poem, Therese!!
Bacha Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 3:00 PM
Carrie so happy you passed by, i love your smile in your picture. Thank you for reading my poem. Love Terry xoxo
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April 13, 2013 at 1:52 PM
It is so beautiful and true as you yourself are! A magnificent and romantic poem speaking of how love ought to be! I am back!
Bacha Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 1:59 PM
Hi Demetrios, so happy you are back, and thank you for passing by, & your comments are very uplifting. Love Terry xoxo
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