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When We Drew Lines

The line in the sand which we drew in my bed, do you recall how we drew them, the things that we said? Was it just hot air to keep my balloon afloat, rambling and kidding before grabbing your coat and dropping an anchor to try sink my boat before disembarking? The line, those words, full of promise and hope anchored me in a storm, my heart crashing on the rocks of harsh disappointment, trapped and abandoned. Oh but for my resilient, stubborn soul, which refuses to be tied down and stay in the harbour waiting for another voyage to abound. I am as tall and proud as The Royal Clipper and on every strength i will raise my sails and use the storm to draw new lines which you can see where it dragged that anchor back out to sea, i am free, no longer your nonentity, i am woman and deserve more you see. Good luck on your journey, watch out for the storms, always look for the lighthouse, it has saved me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/14/2018 3:13:00 PM
Very good write on feelings emotions :)
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Jacqueline Ohara
Date: 11/15/2018 6:21:00 AM
I appreciate this comment, I felt exposed in my mad mind but the anger came out and I was able to sail in, till the next storm ??
Date: 8/10/2018 4:12:00 AM
I love this poem. Carried me away!
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Jacqueline Ohara
Date: 8/10/2018 2:38:00 PM
Thanks Helen, very healing for me x

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