When Voices Stir
Version #1
She stirs, and with her, the earth shakes,
lifting dust from where silence once lay—
a force long restrained, now breaking loose.
Version #2
She awakens, and the earth quivers,
stirring up dust from the calm that once lingered—
a power that was held back, now set free.
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