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When Velvet Turns To Stone

When velvet turns to stone
When heart forgets the home
When lovebirds all have flown
When only hate is shown

When kindness turns to night
When blindness covers sight
When fear chases delight
When dreams have taken flight

When trust is torn in two
When old gives way to new
When dry replaces dew
When words are listless, few

True velvet will remain
The texture still the same
It lives up to its name
Plush softness is its claim
It will not suffer blame
It will not taste of shame

True velvet will remain……

Eileen Manassian
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:00 PM
How is the Velvet Princess! I enjoyed reading this one again Eileen.
Manassian Avatar
November 29, 2015 at 3:06 PM
Thanks, dear Richard. You warm my heart.....
Breidenthal Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 2:42 PM
I read this last night, and came back to comment. I am loving your latest compositions, Eileen! This is exceptional poetry in my eyes. So beautiful, I can feel the endurance of pain, sadness and suffering, though it's as if with all of those things, the words remain strong, telling it like it is. I've always admired your passionate pen. This one is going to my favs! Love it! Always, Laura
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 12:04 AM
I'm so pleased that you like my work, Laura. Opinions change...however, something that was beautiful...remains beautiful...despite the change of opinion. :) Thank you for your gracious visit and comment. You are truly, a lovely woman. Hugs
Thirtyseven Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 1:09 PM
Such rhythm. Nice last line, I was a little concerned there for a minute that this poem might be going in the other direction.
Manassian Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 12:05 AM
I'm glad that you liked my piece, Scott. I felt good to write this poem. :) Thanks for the visit.
Smith Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:00 PM
This hits home when things change, when people change...what shall we do?...love deeper?...take the higher road?....turn the other cheek?
Manassian Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:01 PM
Tell me when you know, Tim....because I don't know anymore.....thanks for the visit....always good to see you
Pinet Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 2:00 PM
Your word choices define what you wish to capture and you convey these emotions well to the reader. Emile.
Manassian Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Thank you kindly for your visit, Emile. Very kind of you to pass by. I appreciate it.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 2, 2015 at 9:42 AM
You are sweet, it is my pleasure to read your work. Hugs Rick.
Manassian Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Thanks, Richard. I have missed your visit today.
Nunez Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 11:13 PM
indeed, true velvet remains no matter how long the time, Eileen. It remains true to its texture and design. Such lovely thoughts and lines. hugs
Manassian Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 2:35 PM
Thank you for your visit to my Velvet poem, Kim. Very kind of you to pass by. Hugs
Nayak Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 1:53 PM
What a touching write! Let the true velvet prevail and propogate.... And let the trust unworthy leave the place for all the good:-) Deep meaning in this capsule dear Eileen Love, Anulaxmi
Manassian Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 2:36 PM
Thank you for visiting, Anul. I will be by to visit you shortly.
Onclaud Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 1:11 PM
this kind of velvet is immortalized by your words, eileen.. pretty write.. huggs
Manassian Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 2:32 PM
Thanks for your visit to my work, Nette. I appreciate it...Hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 12:52 PM
If only Man's love was that of the velvet of your poem, dear Eileen, then the world a kinder world would certainly be! Velvety beautiful! A seven!
Manassian Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 2:31 PM
Thank you for your gracious visit and comment, Dr Trifiatis. The world would a kinder place be if people were honest and true.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 8:41 AM
"when" I read your words I am always taken on a journey. Great poem to start the new month.
Manassian Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 9:35 AM
Thank you, Richard. If I could give out a prize for the person who has most faithfully followed and encouraged me during my time here at PS...it would go to you! :) You never miss a write....You always encourage. That's why you continue to be my Guarding Poet. :) Thank you.
Chircop Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 8:08 AM
Oh when people change and so their love nest..When new replaces the old...What happens then apart heartache...That velvet gives hope..that everything might change but some passion will remain..So true Eileen..So true...Love it.
Manassian Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 9:40 AM
People do change....perceptions change...but what is of beauty...remains, Charmaine. I find comfort in that. :) Something as beautiful and soft as velvet is what it is....it can never change to stone...no matter what others think of it due to whatever misconceptions they may have. You are a sweetie pie. I love you. Hugs
Severo Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 12:33 AM
When trust is torn in two, time to shoot the bloody fool! hahahahaha I like this poem.
Manassian Avatar
August 1, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Interesting post, Aurore. unfortunately, I don't have a gun! ;)
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