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February 7, 2026, entered in 

Anoucheka Gangabissoon's Dark Silent Night contest

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When Twilight Falls


For some, desire for night begins at sunset.
The listlessness and loneliness will end
when twilight falls and loved ones, who complete them,
are by their sides with precious time to spend.

For some, the dread of night begins with shadows 
that lengthen as the sunlight starts to wane.
Then twilight reinforces the reality—
that hopes for love’s arrival are in vain.

The twilight has its usual effect
each time it falls—a blessing or a bane.
Some spend their nights with those who make them happy;
some spend their nights in loneliness and pain.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
February 20, 2026 at 4:12 PM
Hello Janice Canerdy, I like the night. I like to see the full moon shine. with the shiny stars out the shinning bright. I often sawee a face in the full moon. Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 10:59 AM
Hello janice, you are very welcome. Hugs. /Drflene/
Canerdy Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 10:39 AM
Thanks so much, Darlene. Janice
Bauer Avatar
February 7, 2026 at 1:07 PM
excellent poem, janice! i think you've captured both sides of twilight perfectly! good luck in the contest...
Canerdy Avatar
February 8, 2026 at 10:27 AM
Thanks so much, Ilene. Janice
Cunningham Avatar
February 7, 2026 at 9:52 AM
I for one welcome the night, a chance to reflect on the day and recharge ready for what tomorrow brings. Good luck in the contest Janice and have a lovely weekend. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
February 8, 2026 at 10:26 AM
Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
Goldsmith Avatar
February 7, 2026 at 8:27 AM
"When Twilight Falls" is a wonderful write. I enjoyed reading. "Good Luck" Have a creative day/weekend writing away...............
Canerdy Avatar
February 8, 2026 at 10:25 AM
Thanks so much, Paula. Janice
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