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When Times Are Rough

Who can u turn too if thing's Ain't what it seems? How can u chase a goal if you don't Have any dreams? Life a roller coaster But you have to hold on tight! Longs you keep your Lord first I promise everything will be alright We all battling each other like Day and Night Have to make a change! Soon as I say I'm going to Make a difference People start acting strange.. Well life is like a space ship It goes round and round Must have something to fall back on Or you will hit solid ground You must charge up like new electronics Make poetry a lifetime commitment Like you on hooked on phonics!!

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Date: 8/25/2017 8:26:00 PM
Great poem Dante, you certainly aim for the name!
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Date: 8/25/2017 8:35:00 AM
"How can u chase a goal if you don't Have any dreams?"--So true! Keep dreaming, and keep writing!
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Date: 8/22/2017 10:06:00 AM
Well written, I am inspired to tackle every obstacle in life.
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Date: 8/22/2017 4:18:00 AM
You've answered the question right. When troubles arise, And confusion is to us nigh. When the hermits kiil dove, And valentine consumes love. There's only an option of all: Calling unto only our Lord.
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Date: 8/21/2017 7:58:00 AM
Very encouraging poem
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