When Time Stands Still

There is a time when everything stands still,
When life's biggest moments 
Are up close and ever so real
You take my breath away with all your sex appeal
When your eyes meet mine its a really big deal
You really know how to make this man squeal
I was hoping that you would be interested 
In just how I feel

Oh baby if you really knew
How much of a thrill you would fulfill
Life with you makes my heart feel so true 
It's not possible for me to sing the blues 
Not when my eyes are full of all of you

All of this because I'm so in love with you,
As your love surrounds all parts of me
I can foresee total reality 
That sets our hearts free
To be on an amazing love journey
How all of this makes us feel 
when time stands still 
And everything is so real

This much we can agree 
Together we are so happy to be
Living life's opportunities
It's crazy unreal how you make all of this feel
Life is one big chance that leads us 
To that special romance
When our hearts begin to dance, 
And time stands still 
As we realize our life together is forever 
And so very real

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/7/2018 9:30:00 AM
This is a poem within you poem: You take my breath away with all your sex appeal When your eyes meet mine its a really big deal You really know how to make this man squeal I love this part; your whole poem is nice.
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Date: 5/7/2018 11:44:00 AM
Yes this poem is being well received and is truly what I love to write. Thank you once again, Caren, for taking the time to read my work it means a lot to feel so welcome on P.S. from the start everyone has been so receptive it's awesome and I believe it to be my new home to launch my books from. God bless Caren.Jack2
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