When thoughts go dark

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In my mind skies can be blue
thoughts can swirl and whirl
and take an unexpected turn
feeling like I've consumed a witch's brew

Just when I think there'll be no end
I find the perfect spot under the sun
to drop off what feels like a megaton
and soak in that sunshine before I call a friend



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 5/9/2025 7:09:00 AM
Dear Line, Such a gentle breeze after a storm that even when thoughts spiral, there’s always a patch of sunlight waiting. I love how you capture both the weight and the relief, and how friendship is always the brightest spot. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2025 7:59:00 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Daniel . Most appreciated ~
Date: 5/8/2025 7:51:00 PM
We are what we think -- more so than what we eat. A very wise fellow once said: "The thoughts of a man -- are the man." ~ Dee P. Thinker
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/9/2025 7:59:00 AM
Absolutely true !!
Date: 5/8/2025 7:47:00 AM
nice one....i often just sit with a coffee and watch the bird feeders....camera fun .....len
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Date: 5/8/2025 2:13:00 PM
nature is such a source of rebalancing energies ~
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