Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

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When thoughts go dark

In my mind skies can be blue
thoughts can turn and swirl
and take an unexpected whirl
feeling like I've consumed a witch's brew

Just when I think there'll be no end
I find the perfect spot under the sun
to drop off what feels like a megaton
and soak in that sunshine before I call a friend



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Daniel Henry Rodgers May 9, 2025 at 7:09 AM Dear Line, Such a gentle breeze after a storm that even when thoughts spiral, there’s always a patch of sunlight waiting. I love how you capture both the weight and the relief, and how friendship is always the brightest spot. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Line Gauthier May 9, 2025 at 7:59 AM Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Daniel . Most appreciated ~

Gershon Wolf May 8, 2025 at 7:51 PM We are what we think -- more so than what we eat. A very wise fellow once said: "The thoughts of a man -- are the man." ~ Dee P. Thinker Line Gauthier May 9, 2025 at 7:59 AM Absolutely true !!

Sand Blown May 8, 2025 at 7:47 AM nice one....i often just sit with a coffee and watch the bird feeders....camera fun .....len Line Gauthier May 8, 2025 at 2:13 PM nature is such a source of rebalancing energies ~